Kai and Jack (Kirby OCs)

Ohhhh god. OH MY DEAR GOD. I have more OCs by Thefairy21/TouhouProject123/Thefoxteam21 on Roblox.

So, stealing someone's recolor and making it your Stu makes it cool?

How pleasant. An insult to one of my favorite game franchises.

Oh, let's take a look at its stu qualities.

Hes the division A leader of the kirby squad, his perma ablities are beam and mirror, hes also the first member of the kirby squad, well, the first that kirby hired, saito is the second, and aege was the third. he also has a violet warpstar

Good god.

 Hes the division A leader of the kirby squad,

Let me be a grammar nazi and a judgemental freak.
Kirby Squad*
Division A*
He's*
Also, what the hell is a "Kirby Squad"? I haven't played Triple Deluxe, so if it's canon, excuuuse me, Princess!

 his perma ablities are beam and mirror,

Perma abilities? What the fuck. Again, if it's canon in KTD, excuuuse me, Princess!

 hes also the first member of the kirby squad,

Agh. You have to give every OC some sort of stu trait, don't you?

well, the first that kirby hired, 

That makes sense. Okay. If the Kirby Squad is canon, though, go fuck yourself. (However, your grammar is still shit!)

saito is the second, and aege was the third. 

Saito*
Aege*
Anyways, who are these people? Tell me. If the KS is canon and those are OCs, refer to my last statement.

he also has a violet warpstar

This is the only part of the description that makes sense based on the Kirby franchise's canon.

Now, let's look at "Jack".

What does the Kirby say? I don't think so!

The hell? This is not Jack.

THIS is Jack.

This is the REAL Jack.

Please forgive me for my pun. I promise to try not to make any more puns. IMSOSORRYPLEASEDONTKILLME

Okay, now on to my judgement.

hes a fox, fox kirby hybrid, he has a orange warpstar, he has fire abilities, and is imune to fire, he is in the highest division of the kirby squad, DIVISION A+! he hates it when you call foxes stupid, flavor text: woah! a round looking fo- oh, its a fox kirby hybrid

Your grammar makes me want to die.

hes a fox, fox kirby hybrid,

I don't think those are canon.

 he has a orange warpstar,

This ties in with the Kirby canon. This is OK. But still, "a orange".
an orange*

he has fire abilities, and is imune to fire,

Ehhhh... I'll just correct your shitty spelling. immune*

 he is in the highest division of the kirby squad, DIVISION A+!

What a stu... Oh yeah. Kirby Squad*

 he hates it when you call foxes stupid,

No shit, Sherlock.

 flavor text: woah! a round looking fo- oh, its a fox kirby hybrid

Your grammar is bad, and you should feel bad.

I can't take this any more. This is a disgrace to one of the best platformer franchises.
Also, he's admitted to only having played Triple Deluxe. He also steals the artwork for his non-Tektek OCs.


Pissed-off meter: FUCK FUCK SHIT SHIT
Kai Stu meter: FUCKING HELL
Jack Stu meter: YOU ARE A DISGRACE