FNaF OCs - Part 1

We'll be taking a look at OCs for the game I hate the most.

Dolly

holy jesus i have found hell

If you thought the fandom couldn't get worse, you're mistaken.

Jesus. This is just horrible. Let's check out its bio.

Name: Dolly
Age: Human years, 15, animatronic years, 6.
Sex: Girl
Animatronic Species: Little girl
Bio: Dolly was one of the animatronics at Fredbear's Family Diner, along with Fredbear ( more commonly known as Goldie ) and the Puppet. She was a "birthday animatronic"; a breaker of gender roles one could even say. Her job was to hand out dolls and plush toys of Fredbear, the Puppet, and herself for children at parties. In her time, Dolly was one of the only three existing animatronics. She was very friendly and happy, and loved playing with the girls and boys who came around. She saw everyone as being equal, and often tried to teach Jack and Goldie the same.
However, due to witnessing the murder of the crying child outside the restaurant, and telling the story to the children who came around, she was soon scrapped. Not too long after, Goldie was scrapped as well, both to be used for spare parts for the new animatronics-Freddy, Chica, and Bonnie. And soon enough, Foxy, too. While she was rather saddened by the change, she kept her head high, always coming out to greet the new animatronics at night. After the second location closed and the toys were created, the humans modeled Balloon Boy after Dolly.
They took some of her parts and gave them to him, which she was glad to give up. As time progressed on, Dolly started to get more rusted and torn apart to the point where she could barely move. She was kept in the Parts/Service Room in the back with Foxy, where the two often bonded until Foxy got up and left. However, on occasion, she braved the trip outside of the back room. But ultimately, she always ended up sitting outside in the hallway, singing the melodies Goldie used to sing...

God.

After the second location closed and the toys were created, the humans modeled Balloon Boy after Dolly.

What the hell, you can't just insert your OC into the backstory of a real character. And it kind of reminds me of this; an OC ripping off a canon character.

As time progressed on, Dolly started to get more rusted and torn apart to the point where she could barely move.

Boo hoo.

 She was kept in the Parts/Service Room in the back with Foxy, where the two often bonded until Foxy got up and left.

Typical "my oc is frends wit faxy!1111" backstory.



This one is bad but not as bad as...
*Cough*
Toy Neko.

Let's move on.

Toy Neko

"KAWAII DESU SUGOI" shit shouldn't cross over with a bad game. It creates hellspawn.

Name: Toy Neko
Human Name: Karin -Last Name Unknown-
Age:unknown
Gender:female
Species: Neko Cat(Animatronic)
Height:She comes up a little bit above neko's elbow.
Weight: ???
Eye/Optic Color: Rose and Lavender
Personality:Toy Neko's personality isn't that much different from Neko's/Athena's personality. Toy Neko isn't as shy as neko and loves to make new friends. People see toy neko as neko's little sister although neko won't say anything about it. She acts childish most of the time and tries to make others smile if they are down. She can become serious and mature when the time calls for it. She confuses people about how old she really is. Toy Neko rarely comes out at night.
Appearance:Toy Neko still has the same color hair, ears and tail but her outfit is different. She has two blue stripes under her eyes. Toy Neko wears a ice-blue dress with black frills and a black bow tied to the back of the dress. White sleeves, collar, and frills. She also has light turquoise socks and bow. She wears a Ice blue and light turquoise bow on top of her head. She has a white ribbon tied to her tail but no bell on it like neko's.
Other:At night she becomes a bit agrressive.
Bio:Karin like most kids, dissapeard at the restaurant along with the new toy animatronic. Karin can't remember most of her past as a human but she does know that she was murdered, she just doesn't know who did it though. A couple of weeks after the animatronic and karin went missing, The toy animatronic was found. They had to clean the suit. Toy Neko was set up in the restaurant the next day. Toy Neko wasn't there to replace neko but to help her take care of the kids and make sure they don't get hurt. Toy Neko looks up at athena like an older sister. She doesn't like it if somebody tries to take apart her 'sister' and will try to attack them but not badly hurt or kill them.

Cringeworthy.

Species: Neko Cat(Animatronic)

Cat cat?

Personality:Toy Neko's personality isn't that much different from Neko's/Athena's personality. Toy Neko isn't as shy as neko and loves to make new friends. People see toy neko as neko's little sister although neko won't say anything about it. She acts childish most of the time and tries to make others smile if they are down. She can become serious and mature when the time calls for it. She confuses people about how old she really is. Toy Neko rarely comes out at night.

It sounds a bit sue-ish.

Bio:Karin like most kids, dissapeard at the restaurant along with the new toy animatronic. Karin can't remember most of her past as a human but she does know that she was murdered, she just doesn't know who did it though. A couple of weeks after the animatronic and karin went missing, The toy animatronic was found. They had to clean the suit. Toy Neko was set up in the restaurant the next day. Toy Neko wasn't there to replace neko but to help her take care of the kids and make sure they don't get hurt. Toy Neko looks up at athena like an older sister. She doesn't like it if somebody tries to take apart her 'sister' and will try to attack them but not badly hurt or kill them.

Let's take this apart and discuss it.

She doesn't like it if somebody tries to take apart her 'sister' and will try to attack them but not badly hurt or kill them.

I don't know shit about FNaF, but that doesn't sound like a trait of one of the animatronics. Correct me if I'm wrong.

 Back to the appearance.

This looks like the stereotypical "kawawaoo naykoe animu meido". It doesn't look like a FNaF animatronic at all. It looks like a weeaboo's shitty Rozen Maiden OC (I'm not saying Rozen Maiden is a weeby thing).

This one was absolutely horrible.

Moving on.

Penny the Pirate Parakeet

As if there weren't enough knockoffs of canon characters.

This is horrifying. THE EYES.

Name(s): Penny
Duration of service (age): 1988 - 1995, was brought back in 2013.

Height: The same as Rena
Fur colour: Light lime green and a lemony yellow pattern

Eye colour: Darker lime green
Reason for decommission: Due to voice glitching, her programmed responses started to sound.. Odd, lets say.
Brought back into service?: Yep.
Function in the Pizzeria: Waitress
Level of intelligence (measured against a person): Quite a bit dimwitted, but can be clever in certain situations.

Programmed personality: Mischievious, witty, yet bubbly.
Personal audio: "May I have, er take your order?" "Okie dokie!" "Can I have pizza, too?" "Awww..."
Fredbear's design: Design shown here
Toy Design: Slightly lighter colors, bandana has a skull with cross bones
Freddy Fazbear's design: Design shown here
Unique skeletal features/Ai features:
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Quirks:

Passive/Aggressive:
FNaF: Agressive
FNaF2: Agressive
Hours most active:
FNaF: 3-4
FNaF2:3-4
Nights most active:
FNaF: 4-5
FNaF2:4-6
Starting location:
FNaF: Near pirate's cove
FNaF2: Dining area
Programmed route of the restaurant:
FNaF: Pirates cove - Dining area - Supply cabinet - West hall
FNaF2: Dining area - West hall - Supply cabinet - West hall
Mechanics:
FNaF: If you dont check her enough, she will slowly inch towards you.
FNaF2: Same as ^^^
Audio cues:
FNaF: Metal talons clinking, Shrill , yet quiet screeches from nearby, like a squawk
FNaF2: Talons clinking, Random whooshing
Attack screen:
FNaF: For about 5 seconds, you cant move or do anything, then she will come from the side of the door, like Foxy.
FNaF2: Same as ^^
“Interaction” with the other Animatronics:
FNaF: Seems to avoid Freddy, and will immedietly stop moving if Foxy starts "singing"
FNaF2: Not much, seems to avoid Freddy.
FNaF 4th/5th Night glitching: Her right eye (The white dot) will cross and waver.
Levels of Ai:
FNaF: 6 - 14
FNaF2: 5 - 12
Backstory: -WIP- .___.
Lore: -WIP- .____.
Trivia: Again, -WIP- ._____.

So many WIPs.

Okay, so it's a pirate and it looks (sort of) like Chica. See the similarities between certain canon characters and this OC?

Onto the many flaws!

FNaF: For about 5 seconds, you cant move or do anything, then she will come from the side of the door, like Foxy.

 I told you it was a Foxy ripoff!

Starting location:FNaF: Near pirate's cove

 It's a Foxy ripoff unless Pirate's Cove actually didn't have anything to do with Foxy.




Well, this is it for now. I'm trying not to make this super long. I'll review PPG OCs next, then more FNaF OCs.